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when all hope is lost

January 4, 2011
By bjmcrank GOLD, Dayton, Ohio
bjmcrank GOLD, Dayton, Ohio
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Walking around in the middle of the night. In the darkness cant find the light, . I feel alone, yet I still put up a fight, I refuse to let them see my fright. I watch the darkness sweeping in.. once it comes its gone again, its been so long I don’t know were to begin, when I cant hide the pain I begin to weep, I hear your voice and open my eyes just for a peep. I start to smile and take a leap. For once, I have no reason to seep….



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on Jan. 14 2011 at 1:36 pm
Almost_Lover GOLD, Mission, South Dakota
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i like ur poem cause it sounds so natural and the raw true emotions are shown =]

on Jan. 13 2011 at 12:19 pm
blackrose326 GOLD, Burlington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
If who I am is what I have and what I have is lost then who am I? Anonymous
Beauty can not be found in worldy views for these are; corrupted veiws straight form the gates of hell - Anonymous

Great work! it hit a hard spot in my heart. Def. touching Good Job:)

on Jan. 13 2011 at 9:01 am
MissLynn BRONZE, Hampton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Never say never but don't say forever.

I love that leap of hope at the end. Happy endings rock.

jasso GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2011 at 2:57 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
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Favorite Quote:
courge dose not always roar, Sometimes courge is a quiet voice at the end of the day saying : i will try again tomorrow

its sad and hold lots of emotions

i like it because it seems so pure