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My Song in E Sharp

May 14, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Your eyes composed of stars and light,
No melody ever harmonized from such a beautiful sight,
You are my song, created in melody,
My angelic voice that holds the key,
The key to living together in harmony...

Our dance increases tempo as I gaze into your eyes,
The momentum of our song begins to flatly die,
What song could ever describe your beauty divine?
Lost in our spinning,
Transgressed to three quarter time...
I can sharply see you will forever be mine.

Oh, by the heavens, could this ever be?
I am so naturally engulfed by your melody.

This song so dulce,
Tied by our love,
Reascending up to heavens above,
Where you stand, where you weep,
With my heart you were destined to keep.

So imaginary,
Accompanied by a golden harp,
You sing my song, our song,
Written in E Sharp.

The author's comments:
This is my favorite of all he has written for me... It's comparing me to a song <3 just like all the others he has written(:

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on May. 19 2012 at 3:29 pm
alex_kiteflyer BRONZE, Darwin, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"You can either be a cop or a criminal, but when you're facing a loaded gun what's the difference?"

this one is absolutely wonderful :) i'm looking forward to read more frm you. :)

on May. 17 2012 at 6:49 am
Skullblood BRONZE, Not Telling :P, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Nevermore" said the Raven.~ By Edgar Allen Poe

Absolutely gorgeous! Loved your word choice and descriptive, fluent, and graceful voice. Keep up the amazing work. :)