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He makes me....

July 4, 2012
By British_Maddie BRONZE, Sydney, Other
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When words fail.. music speaks

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He makes the bad seem to go away.

He makes me realize today is a new day.




He makes me feel as free as the wind,

He makes me think a broken heart can mend.




He makes me think the sun could shine even when it rains.

He makes me forget about the pain.




He makes me remember why i write.

He takes away my fright.

© Lauren N., Denton, TX

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wrote this about a certain someone... you know who you are.
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albinotiger GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2012 at 1:33 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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&quot;Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win&quot;- Stephen King<br /> &ldquo;In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate&rdquo;- Isaac Asimov

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i can definetly feel the emotion great writing skill
albinotiger GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2012 at 1:33 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win&quot;- Stephen King<br /> &ldquo;In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate&rdquo;- Isaac Asimov

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i can definetly feel the emotion great writing skill
sam_101 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 6 2012 at 1:32 am
sam_101 BRONZE, ......................, Other
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lucky guy ;)
alex_kiteflyer BRONZE said...
on Jul. 5 2012 at 8:43 pm
alex_kiteflyer BRONZE, Darwin, Other
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you-know-who will be pleased :). you're such a class act sis. its lovely
elliebelly BRONZE said...
on Jul. 5 2012 at 8:36 pm
elliebelly BRONZE, Dallas, Georgia
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live for today, tomorrow may never come.

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awh, this is good. great poet. keep it up!
welcometoplanetearth SILVER said...
on Jul. 5 2012 at 8:16 pm
welcometoplanetearth SILVER, Devon, Pennsylvania
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Aw, this is so sweet :)
Swimmerguy SILVER said...
on Jul. 5 2012 at 7:44 pm
Swimmerguy SILVER, N/A, Iowa
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sounds like you really like this guy. im glad you found someone!