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Missing You

May 10, 2013
By Hitesh BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
Hitesh BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Be yourself; everyone else is already taken.”
― Oscar Wilde


The memories of your love,
Are the ones which are fond,
I cannot live without you,
The tears I shed are now a pond,
A pond in which our relationship sails,
It sails a million miles away,
Away from the fondest place in my life,
Your Heart, Those were the greatest days.
Talking to you on the phone,
And here I am an aimless creature,
Now its only me all alone,
Fearing my uncertain future,
Your first look, I was hooked,
Hooked to those shiny eyes and lusty lips,
For other girls I was already booked,
And bordered the other guys.
Your beauty is a never-ending novel,
Exploring into a mystery,
When you called I danced with the shovel,
Hope to you I ain't History.
My love for you can never end,
As you are surely godsend,
Even though were miles apart,
You've still consumed my heart,
Without it I'll terminate,
If yours wont come, I'll meet my fate.
Even though we aren't together,
I get this lovely feeling,
And its worth believing.
As in the daylight I ponder,
Distances have made my heart grow fonder.


The author's comments:
This is a poem written when I was away from the girl I loved for a long time in a place far away from the real world. I was like a caged animal who was being tamed and I only identified myself by remembering the time spent with her. It is a tale of separation and the unbreakable bond of love.

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Sifting BRONZE said...
on Feb. 23 2015 at 6:28 pm
Sifting BRONZE, Citrus Heights, California
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This is very good! :)

Hitesh BRONZE said...
on May. 27 2013 at 2:15 pm
Hitesh BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Be yourself; everyone else is already taken.”
― Oscar Wilde

Thanks a ton AYUSHMAN longtime bro!!! :D  

Labroo89 said...
on May. 17 2013 at 2:31 pm
Awesome Poem! It felt like revisiting the days... I was in love! Your simply awesome! ( Kapil Labroo )

AYUSHMAN said...
on May. 16 2013 at 1:38 pm
GREAT piece of work my friend.keep writing and innovating .

anil said...
on May. 16 2013 at 1:27 pm
u r the best and u wl b the best ..god bless u and maa saraswati  b with u..good luck - u r the best  and u wl have ur book published very soon  

on May. 16 2013 at 1:14 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

kk will do!!! :)

Rocky Racka said...
on May. 16 2013 at 2:38 am
Rocky Racka, Mumbai, Other
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Awesome Just awesome i hope people read this poem and learn about true love!!!! <3

Hitesh BRONZE said...
on May. 15 2013 at 3:12 pm
Hitesh BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Be yourself; everyone else is already taken.”
― Oscar Wilde

  Thanks A Ton! :D DO STAY UPDATED WITH MY POEMS AND TELL OTHERS TO!!!

on May. 15 2013 at 2:46 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
59 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

Cool! :) I love this.