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Dreams

August 8, 2013
By Jay-Wolf PLATINUM, Cedar Hills, Utah
Jay-Wolf PLATINUM, Cedar Hills, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The man who takes offense when offence is not intended is a fool<br /> However the man who takes offence when it is intended is an even greater fool&quot;<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson


Her face is defined yet soft
Her smile, bright with incisors long
Her hair, long and flowing
Her eyes, bright and breathtaking

Her voice is A violin, strong yet gentle
Her wit like her brow is sharp yet soft
Her Personality, open yet not forced

Her, in my mind I see oft
Her, a promise not a memory gone
Her with me talking and knowing

She I might meet
in a place
other than
dreams.


The author's comments:
I had a dream of me and a girl talking and promising some day we would find each other

That is the only dream I've ever remembered after waking up,
I hope I see her again...

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on Aug. 31 2013 at 12:29 pm
Jay-Wolf PLATINUM, Cedar Hills, Utah
25 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The man who takes offense when offence is not intended is a fool<br /> However the man who takes offence when it is intended is an even greater fool&quot;<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson

Thanks if you could check out my other stuff that would be great thanks ( ')>

on Aug. 14 2013 at 4:40 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?&quot; - Ara Weston

this is cool :)

on Aug. 9 2013 at 10:25 am
Jay-Wolf PLATINUM, Cedar Hills, Utah
25 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The man who takes offense when offence is not intended is a fool<br /> However the man who takes offence when it is intended is an even greater fool&quot;<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson

Please give me some written feedback on this and some of my other poems, I'm trying to decide wich to enter into a contest later this year