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Honey

April 23, 2014
By Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
3 articles 10 photos 196 comments

Sweet like honey,

Flecks of sweet wheat.

Green emerald,

Shone in the sun.

Those brown curled strings,

Held firm in place.

Dust will go wild,

Falling again.


The author's comments:
Just let me know what you think, yeah?

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Sail_ BRONZE said...
on May. 29 2014 at 1:56 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
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Heh, thanks... The specific image is literally on this page. You just have to look for it

on May. 29 2014 at 1:19 pm
CorporealStardust BRONZE, White Plains, New York
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I like how dreamy this is! Although a part of me wishes that maybe it could focus more on a specific image?? yeah.

Sail_ BRONZE said...
on May. 2 2014 at 12:18 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
3 articles 10 photos 196 comments
Aw, haha thank you so much! 

on May. 1 2014 at 11:53 pm
nithyaswaminathan BRONZE, Pleasanton, California
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THAT IMAGERY THOUGH <3

Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 25 2014 at 12:46 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
3 articles 10 photos 196 comments
Thank you.

Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 25 2014 at 12:46 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
3 articles 10 photos 196 comments
Thank you! Much appreciated

Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 25 2014 at 12:44 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
3 articles 10 photos 196 comments
Thank you so much! 

Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 25 2014 at 12:44 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
3 articles 10 photos 196 comments
Haha, eyes, actually. Someone with green eyes. Thank you!

on Apr. 25 2014 at 12:30 pm
Rebel21 PLATINUM, St. Catharines, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Where there is desire, there is gonna be a flame,
Where there is a flame someone's bound to get burned.
Just because it burns doesn't mean you're gonna die,
You've got to get up and try.

Very nice descriptive poem; it made me think about the picture playing through my mind; could you tell us which place you were describing?  

on Apr. 25 2014 at 12:24 pm
TheRealUniverse, Nowhere, Other
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An observant poem, I like it.  I hope to see more like this! Thank you!!!

Starakk SILVER said...
on Apr. 25 2014 at 12:08 pm
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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AWESOME.........I like it, you've done a g8 job keep writing..... :-)

on Apr. 25 2014 at 12:06 pm
Lysander PLATINUM, Bangalore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I slay.

can u plz comment on my article Face-off plzplz???  

on Apr. 25 2014 at 12:05 pm
Lysander PLATINUM, Bangalore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I slay.

gr8 poem star watcher