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My Love, the Wind

May 18, 2014
By Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 199 comments

Favorite Quote:
A miracle is just another name for hard work
-Minho in "To The Beautiful You"


I slump upon the swing
A lullaby it sings
Imploring me to sleep
And ease my suffering.

Then Hypnos beckons onward
To a forest, to a stream.
Too late, I have been captured
By reality.

A tear flows down my cheek
No comfort, no relief
Till I feel the wind’s embrace
That leaves me trembling.

The wind caresses softly
He whispers in my ear
“Only I can set you free,
Only I will hold you dear.”

He leads me down a path
To a forest ever-green.
He dances with the shadows.
He twirls among the trees.

He ripples in the pond.
He sits among the leaves.
Yet joy he cannot cherish
If he is not with me.

And though I wished to live forever
In his forest green,
My heart of hearts kept thinking
Of my family.

So he kissed me ever softly
Then I woke up on my swing.
Everything is normal,
And the wind is beckoning.


The author's comments:

I really love going outside and feeling the wind in my hair and watch it make the leaves dance.


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on Jun. 21 2014 at 7:14 pm
Cam_Dale BRONZE, Plainview, Texas
3 articles 9 photos 10 comments
I really like it. The personification and the relationship in relation to you was very well executed.

on Jun. 16 2014 at 6:13 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Awesome job! 

on Jun. 16 2014 at 9:59 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

This is AMAZING.. this is actually the best ballad I've read on here! Great job!

on Jun. 8 2014 at 4:46 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 199 comments

Favorite Quote:
A miracle is just another name for hard work
-Minho in "To The Beautiful You"

thank you^^

on Jun. 7 2014 at 9:47 am
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

I love this! One of the lovelist, sweetest poems I have had the pleausure to read in quite sometime. Aside from a few meter issues, this is a beautiful piece. 5/5

on May. 31 2014 at 10:02 am
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 199 comments

Favorite Quote:
A miracle is just another name for hard work
-Minho in "To The Beautiful You"

hypnos is an allusion to the greek god of sleep and thnx^^

on May. 31 2014 at 8:25 am
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
5 articles 0 photos 266 comments
Soft, meaningful and dainty. I really enjoyed some of the metaphors. Small grammar errors, but other than that, I really like this. Keep writing! :) PS - what are Hypnos? :)

on May. 26 2014 at 12:05 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 199 comments

Favorite Quote:
A miracle is just another name for hard work
-Minho in "To The Beautiful You"

THANK U SO MUCH EVERYONE!!!!!! *cries happy tears*

on May. 26 2014 at 10:59 am
Lysander PLATINUM, Bangalore, Other
40 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
I slay.

very very very very gud poem LUVD IT!!!!

on May. 26 2014 at 10:38 am
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 228 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our passion is our strength."
-Billie Joe Armstrong

Very deep..... 5\5 stars!!

on May. 26 2014 at 10:37 am
12gage PLATINUM, Genesee,
30 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"GODS OF WAR I CALL YOU, MY SWORD
IS BY MY SIDE.
I SEEK A LIFE OF HONR, FREE FROM
ALL FALSE PRIDE.
I WILL CRACK THE WHIP WITH A BOLD
MIGHTY HAIL.
COVER ME WITH DEATH IF I SHOULD
EVER FAIL.
"GLORY, MAJESTY, UNITY
HAIL, HAIL, HAIL. "

good work, luv4, but it was to full of light and good in it for me, but thats just my veiw. but good job

on May. 26 2014 at 9:56 am
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 199 comments

Favorite Quote:
A miracle is just another name for hard work
-Minho in "To The Beautiful You"

thank you so much! this is my favorite one^^

on May. 26 2014 at 12:12 am
GingerMonk PLATINUM, Lowell, Michigan
20 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I became insane with long intervals of horrible sanity..."
-Edgar Allen Poe

This is so beautiful... Such vivid imagery and attention to detail. I love this.