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Soft Blue Eyes MAG

January 6, 2009
By Carissamariew PLATINUM, Cape Coral, Florida
Carissamariew PLATINUM, Cape Coral, Florida
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His soft blue eyes seem almost out of place
In contrast to his rough composure
He takes a puff from far away
But never will he come any closer

He walks as if he’s on top of the world
His body shifts from left to right
On the outside he seems okay
But inside his mind takes flight

He’s quick to clench his fists and swing
His muscles are always tense and ready
He says he’s fine but if you stare too long
You’ll know he’s popped too many

If you ask if he’s all right he’s sure to say, ­honey, don’t worry
But those soft blue eyes, they always tell such a different story.

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This article has 27 comments.

on Feb. 19 2010 at 2:42 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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wow this is really good.! I have a lot of poems that are like this please check them out and tell me how u like them.! :)

on Feb. 13 2010 at 6:40 am
Emily_Nicole BRONZE, Caledonia, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Your face is a photograph of your feelings. Vulnerability is your strength.

I love it!!!!!Keep writting!!!!!

on Feb. 4 2010 at 3:37 pm
I completely loved it. It perfectly describes my ex. Keep writing.

on Sep. 17 2009 at 2:10 pm
Okay, this is the poem that describes my ex. I almost want to cry when i read it. It is very well written.

on Sep. 12 2009 at 11:40 am
Carissamariew PLATINUM, Cape Coral, Florida
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Thank you :)

Jessah GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2009 at 4:06 pm
Jessah GOLD, Westbrook, Maine
11 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Love hurts. There is nothing as painful as heartbreak. But in order to learn to love again you must learn to trust again.”

Nicholas Sparks

Good job, I really like this poem.

on Jul. 11 2009 at 9:23 pm
scotttyboy SILVER,, Ohio
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hey i really like this peice.....great job!(: