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Corrupted Love

April 18, 2016
By Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
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Favorite Quote:
I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.<br /> <br /> All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.


I don't want more of your love
But I'm contradicted.
I don't need anymore of your love,
But I'm addicted.

I can't get a hold of myself,
I want to break away.
One part of me wants to go,
The other wants to stay.

You have taken over me,
You won't let me break free.
I go and beg and plead.
Your love is all I need.

You caught me in your trap.
Inside your spell.
Is this love going to be heaven,
Or am I going to hell.

Your spell has been cast,
Got me in a trance.
And now I can't get you out of my head,
I need your romance.

You have taken over me,
You won't let me break free.
I go and beg and plead.
Your love is all I need.

Now you made me turn into an animal,
I don't want anymore.
But you make me keep coming back,
I keep wanting more.

My heart has now been tainted,
Into corruption.
You made my heart go into chaos,
Into disruption.

You have taken over me,
You won't let me break free.
I go and beg and plead.
Your love is all I need.

You have taken over me,
Is plain for you to see,
I am yours to take,
To make my heart break.


The author's comments:

I did this a while back and forgot to post it, here's a secret poem revealed then. Enjoy.


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on Aug. 11 2016 at 12:11 am
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
71 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.<br /> <br /> All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.

@ccscott99 Thanks for that comment, it feels amazing to have someone express what they liked about your work. You put a smile on my face and made me feel respected too. Thanks.

ccscott99 said...
on Aug. 7 2016 at 12:25 am
@Masculate_Dream this has to be the best peice I've read in a really long time. I mean, I was honestly speechless. The diction in this is beyond fantastic as is the structural balance of wanting versus not. It may not be what you were going for, but I read this and think of an abusive relationship and the feelings that go with it. Wanting to break free of the pain but not wanting to give up the love they once had. It was very well written and an absolutely beautiful peice. There's not many people who after reading their work, I will be inspired to keep on writing myself but you have made that list. I commend you on that. Keep writing. I look forward to reading more of your work.