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Worthless

September 21, 2021
By WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf


Lies so many lies,
Lies saying,
That I’m fine.
Am I?
No.
I’m hurting,
I’m breaking.
So many emotions,
So many thoughts,
All saying,
You're worthless.
Leave, forget it,
You don’t need air,
To go on,
Then you die.


The author's comments:

This is about how when you feel sad and worthless you feel the only way out is to die. Please comment!


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on Dec. 15 2021 at 8:58 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Talk to some of these people and they can help you feel better, trust me.

on Dec. 14 2021 at 6:59 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks!

boliver said...
on Dec. 14 2021 at 1:11 pm
boliver, Huntersville, North Carolina
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments
Wow, truly breathtaking

on Dec. 12 2021 at 9:22 pm
TessaDreamAuthor_3000 PLATINUM, Tomball, Texas
37 articles 2 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The way I see it, if you want the rainbow, you gotta put up with the rain." - Dolly Parton
" Balance your life with spiritual experiences that remind and prepare you for continued, daily ministering to others." - M. Russell Ballard
"Love is expressed in a smile, a wave, a kind comment, a compliment." - Thomas S. Monson

Awesome <3

on Dec. 10 2021 at 10:09 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks, I am lost for words right now... Of course we can be friends.

on Dec. 9 2021 at 12:58 pm
TessaDreamAuthor_3000 PLATINUM, Tomball, Texas
37 articles 2 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The way I see it, if you want the rainbow, you gotta put up with the rain." - Dolly Parton
" Balance your life with spiritual experiences that remind and prepare you for continued, daily ministering to others." - M. Russell Ballard
"Love is expressed in a smile, a wave, a kind comment, a compliment." - Thomas S. Monson

I just read some more of your work as well, and I think your own words, are the best to help yourself. Here, take a look,
"Dear brokens,
Dear hurt and shattered,
I have a story to tell.
They pushed me,
They said,
I don’t belong,
But I held my head,
To the sky.
You may be hurt,
You may feel down,
You may be broken,
On the ground.
But remember,
You never are alone,
Just keep smiling on."
You are a true poet WolvesRain! So please, be that shining light we all need you to be. <3

on Dec. 9 2021 at 12:55 pm
TessaDreamAuthor_3000 PLATINUM, Tomball, Texas
37 articles 2 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The way I see it, if you want the rainbow, you gotta put up with the rain." - Dolly Parton
" Balance your life with spiritual experiences that remind and prepare you for continued, daily ministering to others." - M. Russell Ballard
"Love is expressed in a smile, a wave, a kind comment, a compliment." - Thomas S. Monson

Dear WolvesRain,
I hate to admit this, but what you wrote, is all I've been feeling for the past month. So if you're feeling alone in this world, please don't be. Many other people are feeling just like you.
P.S. Do you remember me? I commented on your wolf story one time and we chatted for a bit. I've written a lot more stories since then. Want to be friends?
Love,
TessaDreamAuthor3

on Dec. 8 2021 at 11:14 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks! I am already on lots of medication and I had a therapist but nothing seems to work.

on Dec. 7 2021 at 5:16 pm
WolfGurl PLATINUM, Not A Real Place, Indiana
20 articles 5 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until one has loved an animal, a part of one's soul remains unawakened. –Anatole France.

A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than you love yourself. –Josh Billings

Men are from Earth, women are from Earth. Deal with it.- George Carlin

A nation that destroys its soils destroys itself. Forests are the lungs of our land, purifying the air and giving fresh strength to our people. —Franklin D. Roosevelt

Never lose. Either win, or learn. - Me

Wow, this is so clear and accurate! Exactly how I feel sometimes! Not a lot, but this definitely puts a finger right smack in the middle of it. Lovely writing.

I saw that other people are talking about suicide.

My cousin has depression and she went through a phase where she was seriously considering suicide. Depression runs in our family, and we take mood stabilizer medicine, as prescribed by our Doctors. Did you know this was a thing? Try it if counseling doesn't work. Talk to a doctor and see if you might need to be prescribed some of that medicine

Anyway that was beside the point.

Thank you for writing this. It's perfect.

on Dec. 2 2021 at 7:11 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

I understand, I haven't had much time to co-write either but thanks, I feel a whole lot better knowing I have someone to help me.

on Dec. 1 2021 at 10:26 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

oh speaking of praying, you are in my prayers.

on Dec. 1 2021 at 10:25 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

...solution: Pray.

so i dont know if this is a good time to bring this up, but i dont know if ill have time for cowriteing for a while. i kinda bit off more than i can chew with dnd and then i thought i had time for national honors society[hopefully i do], so i dont know if im available.

on Dec. 1 2021 at 8:45 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks, I really appreciate that.

on Dec. 1 2021 at 2:13 pm
smaddie24 PLATINUM, Cityland, Wisconsin
28 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Light shines brightest in the deepest dark!”
-Jim Butcher

I won't lie to you and tell you that everything will get better because I know that that's not what you need to hear. Just know there are people who appreciate you, and who care about you, even though there are times when you won't feel it. I'm not going to try and tell you what "you need to hear," because that's just something I'd be saying to make myself feel better, and that does nothing for you. I just hope you know that people DO care, and we will support you, no matter your decision.

on Dec. 1 2021 at 6:39 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

I'm almost in tears right now... I just wish I could hug you and say thanks for all the nice words, all of you!

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Nov. 30 2021 at 9:55 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
172 articles 54 photos 1026 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.
--me

We love you, Wolves. Just remember that, even if you forget everything else we say.

on Nov. 30 2021 at 3:33 pm
ILiveToRead PLATINUM, Wailuku, Hawaii
24 articles 3 photos 150 comments
Hey WolvesRain, I know how bad it hurts how empty you feel one moment and then overwhelmed the next. I'm here for you, and I just wanna say, people may tell you "Don't commit! It doesn't solve anything! Just passes the pain to someone else. In most cases they talking about the people closest to you, BUT, If these people really care about you then they wouldn't want you to continue suffering just for the satisfaction of them saying you're alive. Yeah, you're alive but your not LIVING. Only you can decide whether or not "committing" will help you. Either way, I stand behind your decision, and I'm here for you till the end. You are perfect the way you are and there IS much to live for, but only if you can handle making it there, and if you can't it only means you've suffered to long and the pain to great to stay. Great poem btw.

on Nov. 30 2021 at 6:38 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks everyone, I really was needing someone to remind me that I have a chance at a bright future, all of you are amazing people.

on Nov. 29 2021 at 8:35 pm
Kingpoet2806 GOLD, Collierville, Tennessee
19 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
Her heart was an open book with beautiful pages and detailed lettering. She wanted people to read her story in hopes that it would make them write their own. Instead, every person who came across the pages of her heart ripped out their favorite story and took it with them. They folded back pages and bent up corners. They signed their name with sloppy writing and with a simple 'goodbye'. This book is now tucked away in the darkest parts of her, because no one wants to read a tragic story with a bad ending.

Hello! Your poetry is inspiring. You are not alone.

on Nov. 29 2021 at 6:02 pm
EvelyneWrites PLATINUM, Arlington, Virginia
21 articles 0 photos 19 comments
Dear WolvesRain,
Thank you for sharing your poetry and your emotion with us- please don't attempt suicide. There are people to support you and you are not alone. Also, you're definitely not worthless. You're a word artist and your gift of this poem touched me. Although it can be hard to see from your perspective, I can really see the talented person you are through your work. Your art reaches others and makes a difference in their lives.