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Connected

June 2, 2009
By emolover95 GOLD, Park City, Utah
emolover95 GOLD, Park City, Utah
13 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened."


She runs through the snow.
She feels the sadness swell,
In her empty, lonely heart.

She runs back.
She is following her footprints.
She notices something different.
It fills her heart with joy.

Her footprints are not alone.

Everywhere she has been,
There has been a footprint.
Right next to hers.
She realizes she is not alone.

The snow connects them.
They have companionship.


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Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Apr. 11 2021 at 6:46 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
172 articles 54 photos 1026 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.
--me

Cool, but it seems too much like a faint echo of the worn-out poem "Footprints." I don't know if you've heard that one or not.

on Nov. 18 2019 at 10:51 am
Makayla55555 BRONZE, Twin Lake, Michigan
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Act as if what you do makes a difference.
IT DOES."

@emolover95 your connected poem was pretty cool and I very much liked it