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I hate splash water on the lack of there-forth

June 2, 2009
By Anonymous

i feel like im losing you
i feel like im not good enough, no matter what you say
thats why im clinging so hard.

i dont care
your a selfish and only love yourself

i dont understand it either
i dont know whats so wrong
it hurts, a lot
and i have scars
and im just setting myself up for therapy.

i feel like im copying you
like everyone thinks im a fake, a fraud
but im not, this is what makes me feel alive
at least, i think.

i hate god
i hate liars, and i hate gray areas
it conflicts, and doesnt make sense
and theres no proof
so i just cant.

i feel pity for people who are religious because they must be either
ignorant, or desperate for love
like me,

i doubt love is real.
its all fake, and just a game we play
so we feel like were worth something

and honestly,

i h a t e h o n e s t y .

it heavies your heart

and makes you jump out of delusional fraud

and splash water on the lack of there-forth

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Beautifully written! Keep writing :)

on Sep. 4 2020 at 2:51 pm
Buffalo_Soldier, Oakland, California
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I like this except I'm religious and I'm not ignorant or desperate for love. Putting that aside, you did a good job with the format.

on Oct. 12 2019 at 9:05 pm
Tifiwif_uwu BRONZE, Arlington, Texas
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This is soo good I love it keep making more

starzx said...
on Jul. 3 2019 at 6:41 pm
starzx, Manhattan, New York
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Honestly, I love this. One of the best pieces ever.

on Apr. 10 2019 at 3:27 am
Anaïs--- BRONZE, Neverland, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“Maybe ever’body in the whole damn world is scared of each other.”

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"Honestly, I hate honesty." Beautiful. You can truly see the inner-conflict playing with every line. Well done!

abby14 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2019 at 1:32 pm
abby14 BRONZE, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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This could be a song

on Jan. 24 2019 at 9:42 am
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