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August 2022 Fiction Contest: When Poppies Were White

August 29, 2022
By the_black_rose_ GOLD, Chaville, Other
the_black_rose_ GOLD, Chaville, Other
17 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"But to make yourself feel nothing, so as not to feel anything - what a waste!" - Call Me By Your Name


Boom. 

There goes the first bomb.

Boom.

And the second.

Boom, boom.

They just keep coming, pelting down on our trenches like fatal fireworks. 

“I love you, Poppy”, I think as I run to take cover “and our children”. The ringing in my ears won’t stop, the jangling in my head won’t cease. Boom, boom, boom.

“ Do you remember the days when you and I were together and happy? Do you remember the times before the war?”  The bombs thunder at the speed of my racing heart, in tandem with my crippled core. 

BOOM! The fatal blow.

“Take care, my love.”


The author's comments:

Tribute to the soldiers from WW1 and their families


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on Sep. 7 2022 at 12:31 pm
the_black_rose_ GOLD, Chaville, Other
17 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"But to make yourself feel nothing, so as not to feel anything - what a waste!" - Call Me By Your Name

❤️❤️thanks

Afra ELITE said...
on Sep. 4 2022 at 7:22 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

This was so touching...