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It Was Hot

May 23, 2023
By yijialindalin PLATINUM, Culver, Indiana
yijialindalin PLATINUM, Culver, Indiana
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It Was Hot, We Stayed in the Water

But Don’t Wake Me Up

as the Glow

became the Consequence of Sound

Treblezine twisted into a “Moon Moon”

a “Feedback”

as life, love

looped.

 

The window

on Mount Eerie

morphed into

The Glow

A Pitchfork

The Line of Best Fit

Sand

and The Glow Pt. 2

 

But The Gleam

was a cacophony

Between Your Ear and the Other Ear

as Organs

became “ominous

as Drums

became “The Breeze”

as Ice

became “The Pull”

or “(something)”

 

It Was Hot, We still Stayed in the Water

But Don’t Wake Me Up


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