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Spotlight of Solemn

January 22, 2024
By julietf SILVER, Seattle, Washington
julietf SILVER, Seattle, Washington
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Crystal blue waters

At the end of the sunrise


Where beauty lays her head


A single spotlight of solemn

One more broken heart


As she holds her head below


A slight change in the wind

Sets off a blade

Though it doesn’t start a fire


But a slight change in beauty

Sets off the world

And turns the stars to dust


The reflection of her

Similar

But not the same


And with that difference

Sandwiched between

Who she is

And who she came out to be


The author's comments:

I wrote this piece with the subject being someone who I was close to going through a hard time. I often write pieces very plainly without very many literary devices and I wanted to try including more devices such as metaphor and personification. I am in 10th grade in Seattle, Washington and enjoy writing poetry as it helps me process my emotions and get into a better mental place.


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