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Why..?

August 28, 2009
By 17_*sEcREts*_17 SILVER, Corvallis, Oregon
17_*sEcREts*_17 SILVER, Corvallis, Oregon
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Why..?
Do I See..
The Pain In Her EYES..
The Tears When She CRIES..
It's Almost Like..







She DIE'S...

....Why....

cant anyone else hear her asking for help..
dont you see all she needs is just a little bit of love and care..
..or was it just to much to bare..?



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on Sep. 16 2009 at 8:00 am
ToriA. PLATINUM, Columbus, Indiana
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awww! awwww! wow, you've struck me speechless! awww. i loved it, so true, so true.

Undiscovered said...
on Sep. 14 2009 at 8:06 am
Man you are so observant i mean its stranger to find people in this world who feel so much!!

by the way it was just amazing and touching!!

on Sep. 13 2009 at 2:17 pm
MeganAnne PLATINUM, Niskayuna, New York
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Favorite Quote:
All my life I've looked at words as if I were seeing them for the first time. ~Ernest Hemingway

Very very beautiful and lovely.

on Sep. 13 2009 at 11:14 am
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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I don't have a myspace or a facebook sorry. I wouldn't mind talking though :)

on Sep. 13 2009 at 6:19 am
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

I don't have a Myspace

on Sep. 10 2009 at 7:43 pm
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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I love this poem. It's so amazing

on Sep. 10 2009 at 4:00 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Awesome poem! So short and simple, but sends a great message in a few short verses.

on Sep. 9 2009 at 7:46 pm
fashionkissed95 SILVER, Maryville, Tennessee
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Wow very deep love the emotions i catch from your writin!!!

on Sep. 8 2009 at 5:44 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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this is how i feel about one of my friends. perfectly written. well done

on Sep. 8 2009 at 4:51 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

really good!!! :)

on Sep. 8 2009 at 11:39 am
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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this is so true and real.keep up the work.