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When she looks the prettiest MAG

September 12, 2009
By MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
71 articles 2 photos 179 comments

Her makeup was washed away,
By the day,
Her hair has fallen around her face,
In brown wavy locks,
Her smile once lit up the room,
But now she is sleeping,
What a sweet angel,
And I can't help but fall,
No matter what she says,
I think this,
Is when she looks the prettiest …

The author's comments:
This is wrote from a guys point of veiw. Hope i did it well, but either way i think its sweet.

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on Jan. 21 2011 at 1:58 pm
star22 BRONZE, Dexter, Michigan
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that is so sweet! that would prolbably be the nicest thing a gut to ver say to a girl.

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on Nov. 16 2010 at 8:55 am
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i really like this im writing about for my english class!

on Feb. 10 2010 at 8:51 pm
its so sweet i love it

on Feb. 8 2010 at 6:27 pm
happinessstrikes GOLD, Springboro, Ohio
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awwwww lol i love the pic an da poem!

on Feb. 8 2010 at 5:14 pm
redfishcatefish SILVER, Livonia, Michigan
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haha well it's something i came up with. "sometimes it takes the fall to realize the top ain't much better."

this is simply amazing.

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on Feb. 2 2010 at 7:03 pm
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very sweet!

on Jan. 28 2010 at 7:28 am
sydney_hope GOLD, Round Rock, Texas
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This is so sweet and well written <3