September 28, 2009
By BrooklynnBlue BRONZE, Simi Valley, California
BrooklynnBlue BRONZE, Simi Valley, California
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I'm mad at myselfe for not talking to you when I had the chance
When I saw you it felt like the whole world stoped
I keped looking at you from across the room
I didn't even know you and ....I danced with you at their wedding
But the way our hands were entwined as we danced together
But still we didn't speak

Why couldn't I talk to you
not even one word came from my mouth

Somes days i whish i could go back to that day and just talk to you

But the real reason i'm mad at myselfe is for not speaking to you knowing that i'm never going to see you again

The author's comments:
I wanted to write this so people would understand what its like when you have one chance to speak to someone and tell them how you feel but you just can'y find your voice to speak.

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Ali.B GOLD said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 7:12 am
Ali.B GOLD, Lexington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I write whatever flows from my fingers- AJY

this is nice. i like how you write. it is sorta like me.

Mizotron GOLD said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 9:05 pm
Mizotron GOLD, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Writing is not just something to do, its what I am, and what i feel i should be, and thats how it should feel when you know you want to be a writer.
~Kimberly Lynn

Im slightly confused but i get the gist of it all :D ur a good writer :) good luck