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In Love Like This

September 28, 2009
By LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't know what you got till it's gone."


Baby can't you see,
What you mean to me?
I never thought it would be this way,
Face to face
with so much to say.

I f***ing love you.
Who cares if we're two girls
living in this f***ed up world.
Your everything,
that's all that matters.
You make me happy
You make me smile.
Sit down
please stay a while.
I never want you to go.
I want you to know,
I want to be together
Me and you forever.

Put away the knife
there's more to this horrible life
I'll hold you
I'll let you cry.
F*** all these stupid guys.
We don't need them
If someone hurts you
Let me know
I won't let it be so

No words can explain
What you mean to me
Or what I hope and pray
For us to be

Your beautiful smile
drives me wild.
Your gentle touch
gives me a crazy rush.
My head spins and whirls
you are my whole world.

Don't leave me
I need you baby
Save me from this place
It's a damn disgrace
You say i need my space
But who am I without you,
Nothing.
Love me baby
Save me.

I won't hurt you
I won't make you cry
I'll love and hold you close
During your darkest hours
And when your tears fall
in showers.

I'll kiss your lips
and touch you with my fingertips
I'll love you forever
Leave you never.


The author's comments:
This is for Noelle. I love her more than life itself and miss her more and more everyday.

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on Oct. 11 2009 at 4:34 pm
Free.The.Poison PLATINUM, Hanford, California
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Favorite Quote:
Even in our Darkest hour, we must always remember never to spare.

Your welcome. Any new writing coming out soon?

on Oct. 11 2009 at 3:37 pm
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You don't know what you got till it's gone."

Thanks for the comment :)

on Oct. 10 2009 at 6:15 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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amazing poem :) i can totally relate

on Oct. 9 2009 at 10:24 pm
LostinthisWorld.67 BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You don't know what you got till it's gone."

Thanks everyone's judgmental

on Oct. 8 2009 at 9:09 pm
Free.The.Poison PLATINUM, Hanford, California
31 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even in our Darkest hour, we must always remember never to spare.

Nice poem:)

on Oct. 8 2009 at 9:06 pm
PoetryinMotion329 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
2 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
(This is my own quote) " Poetry is a portal into ones mind. An escape from reality. And in this escape we find bliss and understanding...We find ourselves"...

I really liked this poem... I felt a strong connection and I wish people wouldnt be so quick to judge preferences that r " out of the norm". Truly touching...