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Being Dumped

October 14, 2009
By TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
10 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;She walks in beauty,<br /> Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies;<br /> And all that&#039;s best of dark and bright<br /> Meet in her aspect and her eyes.&quot;<br /> --Byron


She spoke slowly,
her words stumbling from her lips.
The words
he couldn't understand
didn't want to understand.
She averted his eyes,
confirming her meaning.
he was lost
dizzy
sick
suffocating.
Immeasurable hurt
flooded his senses.
as she walked away awkwardly,
he stood drowning
dying
without her he was nothing.



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OneChance GOLD said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 3:49 pm
OneChance GOLD, Westland, Michigan
18 articles 8 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;be who YOU want to be, not what OTHERS want to see. &hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;

wow.. this is deep, i love the way u can imagine it tho, cause its very true!! ur a good writer, keep writig...comment mine!!