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October 21, 2009
By rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

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I loved him, i did from the start. Never knowing he was gonna break my heart. I need you to be close to me, while my mind races through time. Thinking of all the fun we had, how i'll miss you, it hurts so bad. We could have had something really good, if only you would have given into the disires of your heart... You want me, you know it. You just couldnt let it show, thinking of how happy we could have been. But those are all just lost memories carried in the wind. We cant get it back babe, try as we may. its done. Were through, What will we do? Ill be here, come back again, tell me you lovve me...prove it. I need the reassurance as i reach for you, just tell me your mine. Your my hero...my man....my dream come true, now that your gone what the heck will i do? I miss youk so bad, I love you so much. My heart aches for one last touch, i need it so bad, whatever happened to the love we once had? My pain is unbearable. I long for the day we will meet again. Just wait and see, youll find the love you once had for me. You may still love me, ill never know...but it dosent matter, not now. Your gone, what will i do? Wait for me babe, ill wait for you.

© Lauren M., Scotch Plains, NJ

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This article has 19 comments.

ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 3:31 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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"Some things will never change"---Tupac

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Sad, but heartfelt and pretty.
musicislife GOLD said...
on Nov. 18 2009 at 11:14 pm
musicislife GOLD, Fairfax, Virginia
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in the end the big picture doesn't even matter it's the little things that make the best memories and life lessons

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wow this really good
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:39 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

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yes i do.... i guess
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:16 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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you know you love the backwards r too.
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 11:36 am
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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chris' name is sooooo cool. idk how they managed to get the r backwards unless they used a foreign language keyboard cause i know russian uses r's like that
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:23 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

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thank you so much :D
ChrisAMoore PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 5 2009 at 8:32 am
ChrisAMoore PLATINUM, Saint Augustine, Florida
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hey umm...thats really beautiful..really...it would get me back=)
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 31 2009 at 11:31 am
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

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yes...yes i do love your randomness ;)
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 30 2009 at 9:53 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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awh.... come on, you know you totally love my randomness. lol :)
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2009 at 4:12 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

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ya...just a little random there lol
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 7:59 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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schmeow!!! lol. i know its random XP
EHunt96 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 5:41 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

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P.S. Check out my writing, I think you would appreciate it. It's "Him..."
EHunt96 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 5:40 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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I love this, I feel the same way:)
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 7:37 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

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thank you :D
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 6:45 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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not at all hannah :)
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 4:18 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

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lol, :(

is it bad?
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 3:45 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
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im not quite sure. lol
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 3:39 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

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ya... i wrote this about an x a while ago.

interesting in a good or a bad way?? lol
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 3:33 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

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interesting hannah