Snow in August | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. Snow in August

Snow in August

November 8, 2009
By supergrrrl_4808 SILVER, Farrell, Colorado
More by this author
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER, Farrell, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand your ground. Don't fire unless fired upon, but if they mean to have a war,Let it begin Here.

View profile

Is this love?
It can't be happening!
You came like snow in August
I didn't think it could happen
Guys like you don't go for girls like me
You came like an earthquake
When I least expected it
My motto for relationships
was always
Better Safe then Sorry

But Your eyes were so...
and your lips were warm and soft
and your hands were strong

And you came like snow in august
I didn't think it could happen

The author's comments:
it kinda says it all, huh?
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Lightning
By Rachel Bellah BRONZE
Seattle, Washington
Rachel Bellah BRONZE, Seattle, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment
View profile
Poetry
Motley Crue: I really hear you
By Arbys GOLD
Dobbs Ferry, New York
Arbys GOLD, Dobbs Ferry, New York
15 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.&quot;Edgar Allan Poe<br /> &quot;A dream doesn&#039;t become reality through magic; it takes sweat, determination and hard work. ~Colin Powell&quot; ~ Colin Powell<br /> &quot;Wisdom is not finally tested in the schools, Wisdom <br /> &quot;A poem is never finished, only abandoned.&quot;-Paul Valery

View profile
Poetry
Breathing
By costarican93 GOLD
Washington, Louisiana
costarican93 GOLD, Washington, Louisiana
14 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The city looks so pretty do you want to burn it with me?&quot;- Hollywood Undead

View profile
Poetry
Do It Now!
By Lost-In-Life GOLD
Whitby, Other
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s never to late, if it weren&#039;t for the last minute many things would never get done!

View profile
Poetry
Nothing to say
By niceenouf PLATINUM
Garfield, New Jersey
niceenouf PLATINUM, Garfield, New Jersey
26 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;As we move on, you forget, we both move on, with no regret.&quot;

View profile
Poetry
Oh, let me be
By Forgotten_and_Lost GOLD
Coffeyville, Kansas
Forgotten_and_Lost GOLD, Coffeyville, Kansas
13 articles 0 photos 2 comments
View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 11 comments.

Swagger Cazy said...
on Dec. 12 2009 at 12:36 pm
this is porchia i just changed my username.Oh
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER said...
on Dec. 6 2009 at 5:46 pm
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER, Farrell, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand your ground. Don&#039;t fire unless fired upon, but if they mean to have a war,Let it begin Here.

View profile
what PORCHIA wrote about, u know
Swagge Crazy said...
on Dec. 6 2009 at 12:23 am
what must be reall tough?
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER said...
on Dec. 1 2009 at 5:23 pm
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER, Farrell, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand your ground. Don&#039;t fire unless fired upon, but if they mean to have a war,Let it begin Here.

View profile
o im sorry. that must be really tough
PORCHIA BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2009 at 5:16 pm
PORCHIA BRONZE, Columbus, Mississippi
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039;I AM WHO I AM&#039;&#039;

View profile
I WROTE ABOUT SOME THINGS THAT I'VE BEEN THROUGH SUCH AS MY FATHER NEVER BEING IN MY LIFE,HOW MY AUNT UP AND LEFT OUT OF MY LIFE WHEN SHE SAID SHE'D NEVE LEAVE,ETC.
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2009 at 6:58 pm
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER, Farrell, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand your ground. Don&#039;t fire unless fired upon, but if they mean to have a war,Let it begin Here.

View profile
haha thanx!!<br />
i wrote when i was on the 'zone'  if u know  what i mean.<br />
i just now realized how incredibly cheesy it is haha
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2009 at 6:47 pm
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER, Farrell, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand your ground. Don&#039;t fire unless fired upon, but if they mean to have a war,Let it begin Here.

View profile
yeah um i think i am mistaken.

sorry bout that

what did u write about?
PORCHIA BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2009 at 10:19 pm
PORCHIA BRONZE, Columbus, Mississippi
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039;I AM WHO I AM&#039;&#039;

View profile
YOU ARE PROBABLY MISTAKEN

NONE OF MY POEMS HAVE BEEN PUBLISHED YET.

DO YOU KNOW WHERE YOU SAW IT AT

JUST I CASE
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2009 at 3:38 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

View profile
i love this!! :) ahhh, it's soo good! how true is this? lol. i like the honestly in it, and the sweetness :) it's very good. the rhythm makes the poem roll off your tongue :) nice work. would you mind checking out some of my work, id appreciate the feedback :)
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 9:20 pm
supergrrrl_4808 SILVER, Farrell, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand your ground. Don&#039;t fire unless fired upon, but if they mean to have a war,Let it begin Here.

View profile
o trust me it takes a while

haha but ur good=)

i think i commented on one of ur things
PORCHIA BRONZE said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 6:15 pm
PORCHIA BRONZE, Columbus, Mississippi
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039;I AM WHO I AM&#039;&#039;

View profile
THIS IS VERY GOOD.

I WISH THEY WOULD HURRY AND PUBLISH MINE.

MAYBE YOU COULD CHECK EM OUT LATER