Heart beats | Teen Ink

Heart beats

November 25, 2009
By taylor11 GOLD, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
taylor11 GOLD, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
15 articles 0 photos 28 comments

your hand shakes when you write his name
when you hear his name its just the same
you walk with your eyes closed
just in case you see him
to save the tears for something that deserves them
your heart beats as hard as if someone took a hammer and hit you with it
you're struck
over this jerk
who feels okay with what he did
you say
"I dont deserve this"
and try to move on
but you cant
trying to put someone in his place
but it wont fill
as the space
is seeping with your love for him
you die
its over
youre done
you keep saying that
but why cant you mean it?


Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 5 comments.


taylor11 GOLD said...
on Mar. 31 2010 at 8:25 am
taylor11 GOLD, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
15 articles 0 photos 28 comments
thank youu!

on Mar. 5 2010 at 8:56 pm
FaithSnyder16 ELITE, Metamora, Ohio
180 articles 8 photos 97 comments

Favorite Quote:
Write what you know, and dream of. - Jane Austen<br /> People throw rocks at things that shine - Taylor Swift<br /> Just Keep Swimming! Just Keep Swimming! - Ellen DeGengeres as Dory

Wow, this is really good! I had these feelings before, and It's a really good poem! I really love it! :D

taylor11 GOLD said...
on Jan. 1 2010 at 11:29 pm
taylor11 GOLD, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
15 articles 0 photos 28 comments
thank you so much! again!

means alot

on Jan. 1 2010 at 10:17 pm
Firionel BRONZE, Greensboro, Georgia
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments
I agree these poems are great and need a lot more recognition

on Jan. 1 2010 at 5:27 pm
JeannineB BRONZE, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments
ok really, these poems deserve more comments!! sheesh people