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December 11, 2009
By Babii GOLD, Garrison, North Dakota
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Babii GOLD, Garrison, North Dakota
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A dream you dream alone is only a dream, and dream you dream together is a reality.

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You
When I first met you
I never thought things would be like this
You are now my everything
Every day with you is bliss
The day I met you, I noticed your smile
As breath taking as the ocean
Your eyes like lipid pools of ecstasy
Poisoned by loves magic potion
You’re so interesting and intelligent
You’re my ever inspiring muse
You are my heroin
The drug I can’t help but to abuse
Simply saying, you mean so much to me is never enough
I’d love you show you everything
Unfortunately, right now things are tough
I hope we’ll come through together
And we’ll help each other find the way
On the path we both must travel
Through the chaos and decay
We’ll come out on the other side stronger
And there we will stay

© Trella R., Mountain Lakes, NJ

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Babii GOLD said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 1:47 pm
Babii GOLD, Garrison, North Dakota
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A dream you dream alone is only a dream, and dream you dream together is a reality.

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Thank You.
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 2:46 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx
dkA.M SILVER said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 4:57 pm
dkA.M SILVER, Vail, Arizona
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ok u have be getting way more comments then u r u rock what u got :)