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With Love

January 14, 2010
By hello.beautiful PLATINUM, New York, New York
hello.beautiful PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Look at the nations and watch— and be utterly amazed. For I am going to do something in your days that you would not believe, even if you were told. -Habakkuk 1:5

You just couldn’t
stand to see one of
us happy now
Could you?

You had to take
it all for yourself,
Get there before
anyone else had
the chance. Now
Isn’t that right?

There’s no need to deny,
Because we can see the lies
It’s written all over the walls,
Don’t even try to hide
We already know the truth,
Yeah, we know it all.
Surprise, surprise.
You thought you could run
From it all, now didn’t you?

Tell me, be honest
Are you happy now?
Did you get your satisfaction?

Because it doesn’t seem so
Someday, I will promise you
this with all of my very presence
You’re going to look back
And you will see one thing
one thing will stand out from the rest.

I guarantee,
you will be
with regret.

For what
could’ve been,
and what should’ve been.

I’d like to
Thank you,
For ruining

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This article has 2 comments.

on May. 1 2010 at 11:26 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
10 articles 0 photos 297 comments


i abosolutely LOVE this poem. i think it would make a beautiful song. the voice is easy to like and the third stanza was when i started to really really REALLY love this poem. i'm so glad i got to read this today. great poems really get my mood up ! i love it!

on Mar. 28 2010 at 7:28 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
27 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

wow. so meaningful. i luv it & can completely relate. i hav 2 poemz awaiting approval & i would really appreciate it if u could read em sometime. "My Fighter," and "Goodbye.''