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After Hours

January 23, 2010
By kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."


You don't see
what you do to me
when the lights go out
and I'm all by myself
After hours
when I'm actually me
free to be true to me
free to feel
what i don't want you to see
So you think I'm happy
you think I'm fine
you think you can hurt me
I won't mind
you know better
but don't really care
As long as I'm crying
I'm not in your hair



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CodyBalls GOLD said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 7:29 pm
CodyBalls GOLD, Richmond, Missouri
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Your welcome and thank you btw you can find me on facebook the name is Cody "Coryody" Ball check me out lol ;)

CodyBalls GOLD said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 5:29 pm
CodyBalls GOLD, Richmond, Missouri
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Your welcome and thank you :) I have another profile on here its named Coryody<br />
just do an advanced aearch and put that as my screen name and search the poem "moving on" I have some poems already uploaded on to there. check them out

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 4:25 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

thank you im glad i could help :)

CodyBalls GOLD said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 11:23 am
CodyBalls GOLD, Richmond, Missouri
15 articles 0 photos 26 comments
Inspiration is always good for us writers. Why thank you, Im glad you like it. Like I said before it was your writting that gave me the inspiration.

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 7:15 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

your right its never fun to be used but it gave me inspiration lol and i dont mind at all...its really good i like it especially lines 1-5 :) you are really talented and id love to hear more of your stuff

CodyBalls GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 9:59 am
CodyBalls GOLD, Richmond, Missouri
15 articles 0 photos 26 comments
Hey I just posted that poem but here it is so you can go ahead and read it lol

"Now Im free to feel

These feelings inside me

The ones I try to hide

But if it was just you and I

There'd be no reason for me to hide

Anything from you

But thats just what you do to me

Just like the bird that flew to me

This idea that just came to me

You and me"

I hope you like it. Just let me know.

CodyBalls GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 9:48 am
CodyBalls GOLD, Richmond, Missouri
15 articles 0 photos 26 comments
Thanks for the insight I was just curious. Im sorry to hear that, its never fun to be used. :( I hope you don't mind but I used some of this poem to inspire my own. I used the lines "Free to be true to me Free to feel What I don't want you to see" The poem is called "Now Im free" check it out and let me know what you think of it. By the way thanks for the inspiration and keep up the good writting.

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 8:55 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

No problem...i have a friend who uses me and hurts me but doesnt think what he does really effects me so yeah lol

CodyBalls GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 2:24 pm
CodyBalls GOLD, Richmond, Missouri
15 articles 0 photos 26 comments
I like this one. What was the inspiration, may I ask?