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What Went Wrong?

January 30, 2010
By CrazyBaby GOLD, Portage, Michigan
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"a persons a person no matter how small" - doctor suess

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what went wrong
what did I do
everything was fine
was it because I told you

I was a cutter
is that why
you hit me everyday
made me want to die

everyday, every minute
the same thing
over and over
had to treat you like a king

all your rage
you took out on me
it drove me insane
how couldn't you see

what went wrong
what did i do
everything was...
perfect.

© Russell S., Bethesda, MD

The author's comments:
this poem i wrote after i got out of an abusive relationship with a boy.
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