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Was it worth it?

February 21, 2010
By Bricheze SILVER, Salt Lake City, Utah
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Bricheze SILVER, Salt Lake City, Utah
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"There are three kinds of people in the world: those who make change happen, those who watch change happen, and those who ask what happened. Be one of those who make change." -Robert Buchanan

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It's hard to breath
Without him here
It's even harder to breath
Knowing he's gone forever

Everywhere I seem to go
It's memories of him I see
They used to make me feel blessed
Now they attack every part of me

The question I ask
Is the pain worth this fall?
Is it better to have loved and lost
Or to have never loved at all?

I'm happy that I met him
I gave him the best life he could have had
I know memories are worth the pain
Yet I still feel so sad.

I want to see him happy
I want to get lost in his fur
I want him to feel love again
But I know he's gone forever

I held him his first minute
And I held him his last
His life was still worth it
Even though it happened so fast

© Christy S., Germantown, NY

The author's comments:
My pet goat died in my arms at two AM on February 20, 2010. I bottle raised him and I loved him more then anyone could. His life was short but happy and sweet.
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October_Moon GOLD said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 3:52 pm
October_Moon GOLD, Maywood, California
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This is really nice. I loved it, it reminded me of a dog i used to have. I had him for four years and just like that he was gone, but i never even got to say goodbye.
calephchad BRONZE said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 2:34 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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This peom is amazing! I'm so sorry for your pet goat, but what I really like about this poem is that you can relate this to any kind of relationship. This is definitely a 5 out of 5! If you would like, please come by and check out some of my work and give me some feedback. I would highly appreciate it! Thanks and thanks again for this poem! Keep it up!
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 9:26 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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awww.... i agree!!
ZiRaww! SILVER said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 9:22 am
ZiRaww! SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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I couldn't help but think of my pet doggy I used to have when I was a kid.
ReneetheGreat PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 9:21 pm
ReneetheGreat PLATINUM, Castle Rock, Colorado
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This is so touching! I love the rhyme scheme, and you completely captured my heart! I'm so sorry about your loss, that is always hard :( But if goats could read, he would love this piece, and I do too! :)