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Was it worth it?

February 21, 2010
By Bricheze SILVER, Salt Lake City, Utah
Bricheze SILVER, Salt Lake City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"There are three kinds of people in the world: those who make change happen, those who watch change happen, and those who ask what happened. Be one of those who make change." -Robert Buchanan


It's hard to breath
Without him here
It's even harder to breath
Knowing he's gone forever

Everywhere I seem to go
It's memories of him I see
They used to make me feel blessed
Now they attack every part of me

The question I ask
Is the pain worth this fall?
Is it better to have loved and lost
Or to have never loved at all?

I'm happy that I met him
I gave him the best life he could have had
I know memories are worth the pain
Yet I still feel so sad.

I want to see him happy
I want to get lost in his fur
I want him to feel love again
But I know he's gone forever

I held him his first minute
And I held him his last
His life was still worth it
Even though it happened so fast


The author's comments:
My pet goat died in my arms at two AM on February 20, 2010. I bottle raised him and I loved him more then anyone could. His life was short but happy and sweet.

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on Feb. 26 2010 at 3:52 pm
October_Moon GOLD, Maywood, California
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Favorite Quote:
Today I will be happier than a bird with a french frie.

This is really nice. I loved it, it reminded me of a dog i used to have. I had him for four years and just like that he was gone, but i never even got to say goodbye.

on Feb. 25 2010 at 2:34 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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This peom is amazing! I'm so sorry for your pet goat, but what I really like about this poem is that you can relate this to any kind of relationship. This is definitely a 5 out of 5! If you would like, please come by and check out some of my work and give me some feedback. I would highly appreciate it! Thanks and thanks again for this poem! Keep it up!

on Feb. 25 2010 at 9:26 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

awww.... i agree!!

ZiRaww! SILVER said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 9:22 am
ZiRaww! SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
“Giving up doesn’t always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go. ”

I couldn't help but think of my pet doggy I used to have when I was a kid.

on Feb. 24 2010 at 9:21 pm
ReneetheGreat PLATINUM, Castle Rock, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Strength does not come from physical capacity, but from an indomitable will."

This is so touching! I love the rhyme scheme, and you completely captured my heart! I'm so sorry about your loss, that is always hard :( But if goats could read, he would love this piece, and I do too! :)