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February 12, 2010
By bennyB PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
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the glamous of your eyes make my problems disapear. just breathing the same air as you do sends me to heaven. i just need to see you walk beside me just for some moments to be happy. The wind carries your name and reminds me of you. The sea's crystal waters remind me of your eyes. when the cold january days are here you are my sun and my warmth.

© Miranda B., Neosho, NY

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this piece is a poem i wrote fro saint valantain's day i did not excatly wrote it to nobody
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