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February 18, 2010
By pyropoet DIAMOND, Zimmerman, Minnesota
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pyropoet DIAMOND, Zimmerman, Minnesota
71 articles 0 photos 59 comments

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You are NEVER alone in your troubles - there is someone who is always willing to lend a hand or a shoulder to you.<br /> -L. Kimpton

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I stand before you,
Covered with my sins.
I've tried reaching out,
But no-one will listen;
No-one will care.
And yet here you are,
Standing in front of me,
Willing to care;
Willing to help.
You reach out to me,
And remove my shirt.
For each article of clothing you remove,
You remove my sins as well.

I stand before you now,
Cleansed of my impurities.
You draw me close,
And rekindle my dead soul.
As you step back,
It glows a brilliant white.
I look at myself,
At what you've done,
And my heart is filled with joy;
A joy that I have never felt before.
Tears fall from my eyes -
The joy in my heart overflowing.
You offer me your hand and I take it,
Glad that I am now purified.

© Kena A., Huntsville, AL

The author's comments:
This is about me and my slow coming to God. I haven't had Him in my life for, well, let's just say a really long time. Now that I've come to Him, I am happier and more positive than I have ever been. Please tell me what you think of it.
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megarie BRONZE said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 6:52 pm
megarie BRONZE, -, Michigan
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it is do or do not. there is no &quot;try&quot;.<br /> -yoda

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Please keep writing!!!!!
SimplySloan PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:45 pm
SimplySloan PLATINUM, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
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You have the ability to be great<br /> You just need to find the strength.*-Me<br /> <br /> You can&#039;t just wish for happiness and magically receive it, you have to do something for yourself, to feel it.*-Me

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haha thank you!
pyropoet DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:41 pm
pyropoet DIAMOND, Zimmerman, Minnesota
71 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
You are NEVER alone in your troubles - there is someone who is always willing to lend a hand or a shoulder to you.<br /> -L. Kimpton

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cool! ill take a look at 'em! :)
SimplySloan PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:40 pm
SimplySloan PLATINUM, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
You have the ability to be great<br /> You just need to find the strength.*-Me<br /> <br /> You can&#039;t just wish for happiness and magically receive it, you have to do something for yourself, to feel it.*-Me

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Yeah actually. haha. I'd love for you to look at them. I started writing a month ago, so im sorta new. haha but i fell in love with writing when the idea popped in my head. but that would be great :)
pyropoet DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:38 pm
pyropoet DIAMOND, Zimmerman, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
You are NEVER alone in your troubles - there is someone who is always willing to lend a hand or a shoulder to you.<br /> -L. Kimpton

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i know its weird, but its a good kind of weird.

Hey! are there any of your works that i could take a look at?
SimplySloan PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:37 pm
SimplySloan PLATINUM, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 11 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have the ability to be great<br /> You just need to find the strength.*-Me<br /> <br /> You can&#039;t just wish for happiness and magically receive it, you have to do something for yourself, to feel it.*-Me

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Exactly! ever since i've started writing, i've been like more myself. I feel better about myself. It weird but i love it :) haha.
pyropoet DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:35 pm
pyropoet DIAMOND, Zimmerman, Minnesota
71 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
You are NEVER alone in your troubles - there is someone who is always willing to lend a hand or a shoulder to you.<br /> -L. Kimpton

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really?!? me too! i just love writing - its like i can be myself on paper when i cant be in public, you know?
SimplySloan PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:33 pm
SimplySloan PLATINUM, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
You have the ability to be great<br /> You just need to find the strength.*-Me<br /> <br /> You can&#039;t just wish for happiness and magically receive it, you have to do something for yourself, to feel it.*-Me

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I know! hah same here. I love to write, I'm actually writing my own book. And no problem!
pyropoet DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:29 pm
pyropoet DIAMOND, Zimmerman, Minnesota
71 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
You are NEVER alone in your troubles - there is someone who is always willing to lend a hand or a shoulder to you.<br /> -L. Kimpton

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thanks for commenting! it means a lot that you liked it! btw- i will keep writing - i just can't stop! lol :)
SimplySloan PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:26 pm
SimplySloan PLATINUM, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 11 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have the ability to be great<br /> You just need to find the strength.*-Me<br /> <br /> You can&#039;t just wish for happiness and magically receive it, you have to do something for yourself, to feel it.*-Me

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This was, like, amazing. It really was. Please keep writing ^.^