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The Shoe

February 23, 2010
By Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

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White curly hair,
Short stubby legs,
Black eyes and nose,
Tiny tail curled up and wagging,
I catch a glimpse of this little puppy,
Then I notice,
My blue converse sneakers,
In shreds,
Without laces,
Holes in the soles,
She runs up to me,
And licks my arm,
Trying to apologize,
I guess,
I’ve forgotten about the crime,
And she trots away,
When I remember,
That I don’t have shoes to wear tomorrow.

The author's comments:
This is a true story about my puppy, Maddie. See the picture named Maddie Mischief for the picure I wanted to include with this poem.
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This article has 15 comments.

Skinny7Mini7Maddie said...
on May. 16 2011 at 7:57 pm
Such a cute poem!! :) My puppy use 2 do things like that... Untill she grew up :)
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2010 at 1:27 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

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lol. thanks for commenting...sounds like some converse with  character...
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 24 2010 at 7:02 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
51 articles 0 photos 203 comments

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"I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it"~Edger Allan Poe
"In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have."~Me

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Wow this is really good. The same thang happened to me with my dauchsaun chihauhau mix and I had to cduct taoe my converse, so they look pretty cool
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 12:23 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

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ok ill check out your stuff and thank you for the feedback on my work :)
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 12:22 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

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thank you! i usually write poems a little less easy going so this was different for me...glad you like it :)
babigerl1194 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 11:05 am
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
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aww its so happya nd says alot about your personality. CUTE
XOXOhaloXOXO GOLD said...
on Jun. 20 2010 at 8:05 pm
XOXOhaloXOXO GOLD, Ellsworth, Maine
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this a soooo cute;) i <3 it! check out my poem the suicide... its sad but really creative! keep up the amazing work;)
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2010 at 8:32 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

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my dog is a pure bred--but thats so cool that you have a bichon---look at my picture Maddie Mischief thanks for commenting!!
NonsensicalMuse PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 2 2010 at 12:45 pm
NonsensicalMuse PLATINUM, San Anotnio, Texas
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awww cute poem-maddi sounds like my dog ruby-she a bishon mix(did i spell that right?)
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2010 at 5:18 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

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yep i know what you mean...

thank you for commenting :-)
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2010 at 5:17 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

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Dont call my dog a dork! She likes you! sill sitter....
Sill_Sitter11 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 25 2010 at 5:00 pm
Sill_Sitter11 BRONZE, Milan, Ohio
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Maddie is such a dork.... The poem gave me a good visual picture of Maddie chewing on you shoe!
IAmTheJesusFreak SILVER said...
on Mar. 24 2010 at 2:09 pm
IAmTheJesusFreak SILVER, Chambersburg, Pennsylvania
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This was such a cute poem( and a funny one at that) I understand those "pet issues" if you know what I mean.
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 3:03 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

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Thank you! It's just a quick little poem I wrote when i took a picture of my puppy chewing on my converse!!!
Squishy-Squish SILVER said...
on Mar. 7 2010 at 4:10 pm
Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
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Wow. This is nice . It made me laugh ;)