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A Love / Hate Poem

February 28, 2010
By B.Mack SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
B.Mack SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
8 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yes, we can"


I had a great time
last night.
I'll call you
in the morning --
I love you.
It was a night never
to forget.

Was it really what I felt?
like nothing really
matters anymore.
You told me you were
going to call me.
You never did.
I called you.
Why didn't you answer?

A person's love is
not to be
used and thrown away.
Do you play this game with everyone?
Why me?

Was it the jacket I wore,
or maybe
this is just a bad dream.

Tomorrow will come

around the corner.


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on Apr. 27 2010 at 10:54 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Excelent! I can totally relate! Please read my work id love to hear your view! =D

on Apr. 26 2010 at 5:56 pm
xXLoveHugsXx BRONZE, Chugiak, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Duck tape will fix it!!

:) awesomeness!! :)

on Apr. 26 2010 at 4:46 pm
almac2010 BRONZE, East Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"three colors and one identity"

that is so good. i love it

on Apr. 23 2010 at 4:07 pm
SomeCallMeSteph BRONZE, Florence, Kentucky
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Oh my gosh  i tottally relate! :))

on Apr. 23 2010 at 10:45 am
dirtbiker2012 SILVER, Lawson, Missouri
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I love it!!! Great job! I think everyone can relate to that!

on Apr. 21 2010 at 5:34 pm
ItsaFunnyThing BRONZE, Rolling Hills Estates, California
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i like it lots! great job :)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:09 am
only1life BRONZE, Tripoli, Other
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only have 1 word 2 say. Amazing!!!

 


kdiddy. BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 7:50 am
kdiddy. BRONZE, Hinton, West Virginia
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that's really good(:

Jessi9077 said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 7:46 am
I love it, it was an awsome poem.

on Apr. 20 2010 at 11:16 am
kissingdarkness SILVER, Mill Creek, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
lets see............ be yourself

i really like it