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I Was Doomed

March 23, 2010
By sarajean1018 SILVER, Shelby Twp, Michigan
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sarajean1018 SILVER, Shelby Twp, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I am no man!" Eowyn (Miranda Otto) Lord of the Rings: Return of the King

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I took one look at you
and I knew:
I was doomed

I was never to see the light of day
I was never to hear the sound of birds
I was doomed

You captured me
You made me listen to only you
I was doomed

I never saw people the same way
Their flaws came to me
Like colors bursting off a white page

You were the one I wanted
The only one I needed
And I knew one thing:
I was doomed

© Lauren R., Edmond, OK

The author's comments:
It's about that one person, who you totally fall for. They take up your thoughts, and you compare them to everyone else. Its that perfection they have that no one else ever will.
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Denali.B. BRONZE said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 10:01 pm
Denali.B. BRONZE, Calgary, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Knowledge is knowing that a tomato is a fruit, wisdom is knowing that you don&#039;t put it in a fruit salad.&quot; - Unknown Source

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LOVE IT! lol
xXsmileXx PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 5:51 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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&quot;Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching&quot; ~me ;)

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I really really like this! Awesome job! gah i don't even know what to say.... haha except what i've already said... keep it up
thewriteidea DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 8:03 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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&quot;Don&#039;t cry that it&#039;s over, smile because it has happened.&quot;

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I like how you kept repeating the same line over and over. The repetition added to the meaning of the poem. Nice work! Check out some of my poems, too if you'd like. Keep writing!