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One Moment

March 30, 2010
By Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
31 articles 1 photo 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." ~E.L. Doctorow

It takes one moment
For my world to change
Just a few words
And I’m upside down
I’m lost in a world
That I’ve never imagined
And I break down
When I think about it
Everything could end
But a whole life could begin
If I just took it
Took this chance
I’d leave behind all of it
So I could starts anew
But is it worth it?
Worth the risk?
Just one moment to let me know
That it’s all worth risking
And it was the moment
That he whispered ‘I Love You’

The author's comments:
Just a little piece I thought would be cool to write. :)

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Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 9:56 am
Steph0804 GOLD, Seoul, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Explaining a joke is like dissecting a frog: you understand it better, but the frog dies in the process." -E.B. White

Great! I love the "I love you" at the end.

This is so cute!

on Aug. 27 2011 at 4:54 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

aww this is soo cute! i was kind of expecting some bad news a the end, i really wasnt expecting 'I love you' ! :)

on Jul. 31 2011 at 4:11 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 296 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

aww! very cute :)