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March 26, 2010
By iamnoelle GOLD, Tok, Alaska
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iamnoelle GOLD, Tok, Alaska
11 articles 8 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do or do not...there is no try." -Yoda
"Life is only a dream, to die is to wake from it." -David G. (A friend of mine.)

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Thousands of miles away
But just as close to me
Silence fills the gaps
Between us will collapse

Separation has weakened
And silence has subsided
A feeling claws to reach the surface
While nothing has happened yet
No
Not compared to what will
A beautiful communication

© Grace L., Bacolod City, Philippines

The author's comments:
Describing a relationship (in fact, my first). I shows the issues to be overcome.
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