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Who 2?

April 8, 2010
By amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

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There’s a girl that I loved once


Her name is not well known


At last I got her to love me too


Loved me she did

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In many beautiful ways


At last my patience pays


Beautiful like the moon


Radiant like the sun


Intense eyes that show all

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Great music filled her heart


Heaven’s angels all envied



This girl that I adored

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more recent one kind of easy to figure out my who poems
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amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM said...
on May. 11 2010 at 8:17 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream&quot;

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look on my profile  it's there
hxcRocker DIAMOND said...
on May. 9 2010 at 3:50 pm
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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sorry i don't know why i said that i was meaning where's "Who 1"
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM said...
on May. 7 2010 at 10:49 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream&quot;

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?? where's ghost one???
hxcRocker DIAMOND said...
on May. 6 2010 at 5:42 am
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where's ghost one. Another sweet poem