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Wisps of Wind

April 30, 2010
By amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

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Wisps of wind
Pull at my hair
And nip at my skin
Oh! How I love the chilled air

Trees dance and sway
In this cold winter breeze
Under the largest I lay
When I hear a faint whisper, “Please?”

Please come to me
So we can dance and sing
Strum your guitar so I can see
How birds truly spread their wings

I strum my guitar
And she dances through the woods
Until out come the stars
She would stay if she could

The birds swooped down and seemed to grin
As they spread their wings and took her away
And upon the wisps of cold winter wind
I heard her say that everything is going to be okay

© Brian G., Phoenix, AZ

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amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 10:27 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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thanks a lot:)   i will check it out right now
CarolynQ GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 9:25 pm
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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Idk i read this poem and totally was overwhelmed with a happy feeling. I really liked reading this and enjoy reading your work check out my newwest poem Slave. Once again, great job :]
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 11:06 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream&quot;

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but yeah  thanks

i really liked this one.. absolutely one of my favorites

amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 11:03 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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&quot;Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream&quot;

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thanks  i really liked it

you know noelle?? i wrote it for her cuz she made me cookies  haha and helped with the cover shot... so she really liked it and i really liked it cuz i thought it captured the aspect of her and me and yeah...

yeah.  I liked it haha

hxcRocker DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 5:25 pm
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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Great poem. Love the flow, imagery, and personification. this poem is different but in a good way. I don't know why but it some ways it seems like one of your best poems. it just captures you.