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Paper & Plastic

May 12, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)


I used to have a paper heart
That I would wear on my sleeve
You ripped it off, crumpled it up
You made your choice to leave

So I made another heart
I kept it hidden and strong
Until i gave it away again
My decision turned out wrong

Now you walk in, acting cool
Your ego radiating off your
Hollister shirt
Sure you're cute and sweet
like Splenda
But I know your type you lying flirt

I've had my heart torn, thrown, forgotten
You think I'll come back to you like stretched elastic
You think my heart is still made of paper
Well guess what boy, it's Plastic



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on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:44 pm
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of cheese and flower petal sometimes it's soft and sweet, sometimes it just plain stinks. - M.J.

From the way you descibe him, he sounds like a real jerk.

on Aug. 10 2010 at 2:40 pm
amandap PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
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i love this, its the way so many people can feel sometimes put into your own words! good job!

riley... GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 1:35 pm
riley... GOLD, Yakima, Washington
13 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"i became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity." edgar allen poe.

wow hahaha. i actually laughed at the end of this. great poem, very witty. and also it has a great rhyme scheme that gives it...almost innocence, i guess. haha good job

on Aug. 3 2010 at 7:49 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

I think so that's why I wrote this poem instead. I was venting

on Aug. 3 2010 at 7:47 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanx everyone:)

on Aug. 3 2010 at 4:10 pm
beautifuldisaster18, Arlington, Texas
0 articles 1 photo 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep your feet on the ground, When your head's in the clouds.

I love the last two lines. In fact, I love the whole poem.

 


on Aug. 2 2010 at 10:42 am
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

correct me if i'm wrong, but isn't that illegal?

Birder SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 10:36 am
Birder SILVER, Waterboro, Maine
6 articles 22 photos 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do unto others as you would have them do unto you, unless they do unto you first, then open a can of unto on to them."

"Obey the ninja."

"What's that? And why does it say snickle tickle?"

This is really good. I like the rhyming and the vocabulary. The idea is nice, too. Good job!!

on Aug. 1 2010 at 8:25 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanks and yea i had to choose between writing a poem or deflating his tires so this was it:)

on Aug. 1 2010 at 7:36 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

hmmm. it sounds like you were pretty mad, no?

ShelbyW. said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 10:14 pm
ShelbyW., Glen Ridge, New Jersey
0 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky's the limit when I know there are footprints on the moon."

NI-ICE! :)

on Jul. 30 2010 at 8:06 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1752 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

No problem:D

on Jul. 30 2010 at 8:00 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you so much:)

on Jul. 29 2010 at 8:12 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1752 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

I loved this! So sweet, great rhythm and rhyme.  I love the last line:D

on Jul. 24 2010 at 8:29 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanx Justme

on Jul. 22 2010 at 5:42 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

sweeeet. nice voice, great word choice ^^ good jobb, i love itt!! :DD

on Jul. 22 2010 at 3:10 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you!!!!!!:)

KandyKiwi said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 2:15 pm
KandyKiwi, Boulder, Colorado
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wow super cute and meaningful and smart and sad and true and hopeful! All at the same time!!! :D

I <3 it!

can u check out my work? it anonymous for some reason but its called "What in The World Happened" under pen and ink!

THANKYOU! :D


Thorn BRONZE said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 2:07 pm
Thorn BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
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Flow was great, concept relatable, Paper and Plastic, genius! LOVE IT!

on Jul. 21 2010 at 1:15 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you sooo much minddancer and silentraven:)