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Shower of Kisses

May 14, 2010
By ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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I've been walkin' down this road,
Waitin' for you to come hold my hand.
I've walked miles and miles
But nothing is going quite like I planned.

I stop walking,
I've lost all my hope.
My hands are still empty,
How do I cope?

It starts as a drizzle
I look up at the skies
It's a shower of kisses
Now your hand's in mine.

© Adria O., Edgewood, WA

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Ah, don't you love writing poetry in the middle of the night?
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teenbookworm14 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 10 2010 at 11:27 am
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
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&quot;Nothing gold can stay&quot; -Robert Frost

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i totally agree!!
ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 10:13 am
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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Thank you so much! I'll def be checking out your work! Thank you thank you thank you!
MercedesXO DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 9:13 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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&quot;I realize that life is risks. It&#039;s acknowledging the past but looking forward. It&#039;s taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven.&quot; <br /> -The Dead Tossed Waves.

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i LOVE writing poetry in the middle of the night haha
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 7:34 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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&quot;See in what peace a Christian can die.&quot; - Joseph Addison<br /> &quot;How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?&quot;

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OMB LOVE THIS! im a fan of "ill be fine 899" and u commented on her story so i checked u out. absolutely love this. u dont know HOW MUCH this relates to me!!!! i LOVE IT!!!!!!!! :)

ps: im totally faving this

fearlessalways13 SILVER said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 5:26 pm
fearlessalways13 SILVER, N/A, New Hampshire
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This is so cute! Beautifully written, too. (: The title is great! I saw it and clicked right away because it was eye-catching. Keep writing and please check out my work!
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 12:38 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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awwww :) how cute<3
ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 10 2010 at 5:09 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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Thank you so much! how did you stumble across this poem anyway?
jesseay09 SILVER said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:50 pm
jesseay09 SILVER, Palm Bay, Florida
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Be who you are and say what you feel.... Because those that matter... don&#039;t mind... And those that mind... don&#039;t matter.

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very nice.....