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The Scar Remains

May 14, 2010
By hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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Your name sends shivers down my spine
And cracks my heart down the middle
A drop of blood falls as a single tear
The tears keeps falling, until the heart is pale
But the scar remains

These memories pick at the wound
Tis' but a name, my heart doth beat for
Tis' a name i wish i never knew

© Stefanie K., Katy, TX

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They say "trying to forget someone you loved is like trying to remember someone you never knew". I completely agree
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VictoriaE GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2010 at 4:19 pm
VictoriaE GOLD, Goodyear, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I know who I am. I don&#039;t need suggestions on who I should be.&quot;

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Of course. I already read all your other stuff, I just didn't get the chance to make more comments.
hxcRocker DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 21 2010 at 2:19 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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Thank you so much. I guess it could be song lyrics. I'll check out some of your stuff. Could you check out some more of mine?
VictoriaE GOLD said...
on Sep. 20 2010 at 11:24 pm
VictoriaE GOLD, Goodyear, Arizona
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I think that if you keep going with this poem, you could possibly write really good lyrics. It's really, really good. I can almost feel the pain and could hear it in a song. Good job.
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 7:31 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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&quot;Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream&quot;

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your poetry is better than mine

the fact that you don't write anything else doesn't matter if your poetry is better

i just write more  it's not neccisscarially better

(^spelling still sucks)

hxcRocker DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 5:09 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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You write poems, storys, and music....you're ahead of me
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 4:40 am
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream&quot;

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not even man  you're past it if anything
hxcRocker DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 8 2010 at 2:37 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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Thanks. I am still far from your poetic ability though. 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 1:39 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Jesse this is just... beautiful