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May 26, 2010
By xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

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Tell everyone who I am,
tell them who I
wanna be;
Tell them how you're
not the person I ever
wish to see.
You may also tell them
how well I'm broken,
and how you made me
that way.
Just tell them how much
I'm ripped open, bleeding
what I know to be true.

So go ahead and persue
your reputation by
flaunting how much
I miss you,
but be sure to remember
to say just how much
you're lying.

© Colton D., Lubbock, TX

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xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 16 2012 at 7:32 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

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thank you very much.! Im glad you were able to get such a good vibe.(: I think every pain we encounter has the ability to make us that much stronger:D
pandagirl312 GOLD said...
on Jun. 6 2012 at 10:39 am
pandagirl312 GOLD, Leawood, Kansas
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Good job. I like how it's kind of like "well, yeah you hurt me. So what? You didn't change who I am." At least, that's what I pulled from it... :) Anyways, I really like it. Good job. :)
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 13 2010 at 8:48 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

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not here to criticize anybody captain. welcome you're. do your dance.
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 13 2010 at 8:06 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

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haha thankk uu!(: means alot tht uu took the time 2 read/comment on my piece. interesting criticism btw;) thx againn:D
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 7 2010 at 8:06 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

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You're awesome captian. i love this and i adore the last stanza. it has the mokey written all over it. do your dance.
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 3:58 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

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thxxx uu!!i waznt sure bout this 1 once i read it over again, so it meanz alot;)
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 2 2010 at 10:05 pm
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death."
— Taylor Swift

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I looooove this!!!