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Is It Over? (Pt. 7)

June 12, 2010
By celloizmylife PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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celloizmylife PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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Around here, however, we don't look backwards for very long.
We keep moving forward, opening up new doors and doing new things, because we're curious.....And curiosity keeps leading us down new paths.
-Walt Disney

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Is it over?
That's a good question.
Will it ever be?
Who knows?
... I hoped I would.

Some say love heals,
But they lied.
Love is a fire.
I walked through with plenty of burns.

You've taken over me,
Filled up my head quite a lot.
Maybe someday I'll forgive things I can't change
But 'til then I'll just cry.

You've left me bent
And if you're gone
Will I learn from this
Or lose a piece of me?

You won't be mine
But I can't let you go.
So is it over,
Or is it just the beginning?

© John O., New City, NY

The author's comments:
This one's really cool in that, yes, it is my own work, but I have a bunch of song titles in the poem that express my feelings. Some are from favorite lines from songs (walking through fire without a burn, stuff like that). I just looked at the song titles of everything on my Ipod and this is the result.

I don't have anything else yet for the series of poems. Give it a few days.
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