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June 6, 2010
By Cigg.Sunn GOLD, Avondale, Arizona
Cigg.Sunn GOLD, Avondale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"When we were yonger, we used to think dandelions were flowers, it's not until we grew up that we begun calling them flowers. Dandelions never changed. Our standards did."

My fallen sweet,
Unable to make my eyes meet,
Blood drips from my eyes:
Like if tears were made for lies.
Something isn't right.
Long gone with red lips.
Maybe off at a club swinging her hips.
"I don't want to hurt her" I said with a tear.
I don't remember that's my fear.
As crimson tears fill my eyes.
I blackout and never seen a sight.
Only memory is is a simering light,
But I won't let myself do it again.
The floor is left with a crimson stain.
I will get help to be tamed:
Insanity in your eyes.
Everything is a lie.

The author's comments:
I stepped out of my normal writing.

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on Jul. 12 2010 at 6:47 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Part of the J7X team. :)

Sometimes, when people use this rhyme scheme, it sounds corny, but it doesn't in this poem.

Very desciptive, and even though you say you stepped out of your normal writing, it's still super good. :)

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 12 2010 at 2:37 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

beautiful, wish my poems were that good (haha) 5/5. can you check out some of my stuff?