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Another portion of love

May 24, 2010
By MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.


Anxiety,
I can't stop worrying if you're OK,
where you are,
how you are-
even when you're right
in-front of my eyes;
Worried,
I am always in worry
over your safety,
your well- being,
I worry
even when you're in my embrace:
And these are some
of love's feelings.
Paranoid,
that something is wrong,
that I will lose you in some way,
that something will go wrong;
Upset,
that I can't always help you,
because I don't have the power
to always keep you happy,
that I'm not always around
when you need me:
And these are some
of love's feelings.
Happiness,
to be wanted so much,
to be cared about so greatly,
to care about someone
more than anyone;
Satisfaction,
to feel safe and comfortable,
to have someone so fantastic,
to be so happy inside and out:
And this whole poem,
only makes up a small portion
of the life called love.

The author's comments:
I am trying out a poem series with the same pt but diff words to each poem and a diff meaning in each. The poems in this has "Portion of love" in the title.

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on Jul. 23 2010 at 10:14 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Lol i understand what you mean

on Jul. 13 2010 at 12:16 pm
tianaxbiddy SILVER, Wareham, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Plot is character revealed by action."




-Aristotle

that is so true i flip wen my bf does somethin stupid or i dont see or talk to him for a while. he gets me so worried.