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Love.

June 17, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.


Love is a double-edged sword,
A figureless carousel of dreams and hopes and broken glass.
A piano missing all the keys, and yet,
Singing a melody of tears.
Love is a great, big, thump!
Right in the center of your chest,
That swoons you left to right in embarrassment.
And,
Love,
Is a mysterious figure,
On a Sunday afternoon,
Who brushes his hair back with two fingers and says,
I love you.



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on Jul. 29 2010 at 11:43 am
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

I'm impressed by your work. and thanks for checking out mine as well:) i really enjoyed this.

on Jul. 28 2010 at 11:21 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

THanks soo much!!!!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 8:52 pm
katiepickelsimer GOLD, Dededo, Other
13 articles 2 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Throw your dreams into space like a kite, and you do not know what it will bring back, a new life, a new friend, a new love.

-Anais Nin

This is beautifully written and expressive. This is really good:) I think this piece should be published in the magazine. I really enjoyed it. :)

on Jul. 28 2010 at 7:00 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!!

ELM522 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 4:38 pm
ELM522 DIAMOND, Selden, New York
79 articles 0 photos 139 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All those other girls, well they're beautiful, but would they write a song for you?"-"Hey Stephen" by Taylor Swift

It's pretty, I love your usage of metaphors, and it's very correct!

on Jul. 26 2010 at 7:46 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks sooo much!!

on Jul. 26 2010 at 7:45 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

thankyou!!!!

wild18 SILVER said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 9:46 pm
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

This is so so good :)

well written; 5 stars! 


on Jul. 24 2010 at 1:40 pm
victoriaj98 SILVER, Paramount, California
5 articles 0 photos 1 comment
 wow! this blew my mind away. its so real ..idk how to explain it. keep up the good work :D

on Jul. 23 2010 at 5:03 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

haha thanks!!!

on Jul. 23 2010 at 4:17 pm
KelleySchorn SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whatever you are be a good one-some president i dont remember which
procrastinaters unite!...tomorrow!!-matt
i'm F-U-L-LLLLL i think i can spellllll-allie =]

aww i liked it you should so do a part two! <333

on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:13 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanx soo much!!!!

on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:12 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanx thats so great!!!!

on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:12 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!!

on Jul. 23 2010 at 10:40 am
Danielle123 SILVER, Long Island, New York
6 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To live a creative live, we must lose our fear of being wrong."

Nice job; very powerful. It took my breath away!

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on Jul. 23 2010 at 10:33 am
KatiKat BRONZE, Middle Of Nowhere, Vermont
3 articles 14 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
The most important thing in life is learning how to laugh just for the sake of laughing! -Me

WOW I love this poem!!! I gave it 5 stars :) I love the images you give it, they're so raw and real.

on Jul. 23 2010 at 5:14 am
thealorakwhoreads BRONZE, Jakarta, Other
1 article 0 photos 9 comments
Like this esp. the beginning :)