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Missing You, Can't Lie

July 28, 2010
By VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

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The many feelings inside of me
Kept repeating the same routine as before
Questioning if I should tell you
Honestly
The times you walk in at McDonalds
When you work 4 to close
And I work 1 to 7pm
Crushing down to keep a straight face
Pretend I’m better without him
In times, I doubt and I don’t
Words can’t replace the feelings inside of me
Wants to explode for two years
Missing you how you crank your music out loud
In the middle of the night
Cruising along the street lights
When I was your girl
Missing you
Every now and than
Walking away from the one
Who captured my heart
But yet blew it away like the ashes
Of each burn you gave me

© Adria O., Edgewood, WA

The author's comments:
Jack is the one i wrote this for. he was my first love and i do miss him. it's somtimes hard to walk away from him but i do, the way i once felt him was strong and every now and than i think of him
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VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 9:23 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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i will n thank you, i dearly wan tu know,it means alot to me
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 9:22 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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thanks

 

VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 9:22 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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awwwww thank you....it means alot n i will check out ur writings<3
silent_reader BRONZE said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 1:57 pm
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i really liked it
KirstynAlexandra PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 12:44 pm
KirstynAlexandra PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
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very nice poem. Keep it up! plz check out my writings, it would be highly appreciated :)
MelanieLouise PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 10:03 am
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
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love it. especially the ending :) keep writing, Mel. if you get a chance check out some of my work, please :) you're a great writer
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 9:00 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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thank you...it means alot:) and dont u worry i will continue writing...lol hope u continue reading my writings
KoreyCooper10001 said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 6:20 pm
KoreyCooper10001, Poynette, Wisconsin
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this is really good. (: keep writing! i loved it.
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 5:29 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

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its k...but thank you for reading this:)
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 5:28 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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nahh its k, to write in caps,idc honestly but thank you for reading:) n dont u worry i will write more
WriterGirl33 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 10:22 pm
WriterGirl33 PLATINUM, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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sorry i meant this
WriterGirl33 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 10:21 pm
WriterGirl33 PLATINUM, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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his is great and I totally understand how you feel, I have the same problem sometimes
Hannahgee6 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 9:06 pm
Hannahgee6 BRONZE, Greensburg, Kentucky
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I coMpletly agree with you. And iI kNow yoUR sITUATtion. AND IM SORRY I KEEP WRITING IN CAPS. (IPODS MESSED UP) PLZ KEEP WRITING. :)