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Mom, When Would It Be
July 31, 2010
Compulsive hesitations
Of every questions
Trust from you are
worth as feather
Mom, how come you can’t me go
I have grown
To be sixteen, standing here thinking
Of how frustrating it is to walk a block away
From you
U’ll be afraid I’ll be hurt
When I look left to the right
On the streets
You taught me the simple things
I dearly appreciate with all of my heart
I was a gentle girl
But I have grown
Of every day I’m growing
Either from my 5’3 height
Or my petite body
And the pain and love of the world
To become a woman like you
My mom
I love you
But I do hope
U’ll let me go
Cuz I’m not your little girl anymore
© Abby V., Cowdrey, CO
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VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 7:12 am
thank you n i did:)
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 11:25 pm
i know....i never really correct my words or anythin i gtto work on dat. thank you for the feedback,i greatly appricate it
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 8:14 pm
this is nice, but some of the gramatical mistakes make it hard to understand.
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 5:47 pm
i know it's jus them thinking the best of us but they should trust us to be ourselves n trust our instints cuz its a mistake we will learn but dats the way they love ya<# thank you for ur feedback
