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Your Beautiful Face

July 11, 2010
By MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I realize that life is risks. It&#039;s acknowledging the past but looking forward. It&#039;s taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven.&quot; <br /> -The Dead Tossed Waves.

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It is golden, to a perfected light brown
Elegantly contrasting your piercingly green eyes
Your cherry red lips
They are full and have a tasteful appearance
Your brows, gracefully arched over
Those long and thick black eye lashes
A perfectly sculpted nose
Evenly portioning out its surroundings
Those invisibly microscopic pores
Leave behind the clearest and cleanest soft skin
Leading to the deeply engraved scar
Stretching from your right brow,
Too those cherishable, kissable lips
A forever reminding memory
Of the greatest beauty about you,
You heart, mind and soul that remain determinedly beautiful from within.

© Lauren H., Kannapolis, NC

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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 9:02 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don&#039;t you go to sleep, it&#039;s such a bitter form of refuge, oh don&#039;t you know the kingdom&#039;s under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

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This is really good, and very well-written... it flows really nicely.

Do you think you could check out my poem Sowing Poppies sometime?

ErisRose DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 10:01 am
ErisRose DIAMOND, Ashburn, Virginia
50 articles 1 photo 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Omnia vincit amor et nos cedamus amori- Love conquers all let us yield to love<br /> Sweat Dries, Blood Clots, Bones Heal, Suck it up and dance! <br /> If they give you ruled paper, write the other way

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I loved this! it was amazing! comment on some of mine if you can:)
MercedesXO DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 9:48 am
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I realize that life is risks. It&#039;s acknowledging the past but looking forward. It&#039;s taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven.&quot; <br /> -The Dead Tossed Waves.

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omgosh really?? thank you sooo much:) and yeah ill comment on your work!
MissFaber SILVER said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 7:53 pm
MissFaber SILVER, Wayne, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing Less.

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Oh. my goodness. Really, I don't know what it is, but something about this poem made the whole world stop moving for about two seconds after I was done.

That's a great achievement, you know. ;)

Comment on some of mine? thnx :)

MercedesXO DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 21 2010 at 1:07 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I realize that life is risks. It&#039;s acknowledging the past but looking forward. It&#039;s taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven.&quot; <br /> -The Dead Tossed Waves.

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thanks soo muchh!! greatly appriciated
MercedesXO DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 21 2010 at 1:07 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I realize that life is risks. It&#039;s acknowledging the past but looking forward. It&#039;s taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven.&quot; <br /> -The Dead Tossed Waves.

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thank youu:)

and most deff!!

sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 3:35 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
27 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

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Awww! so sweeeet. Imagery is undeniably superb. plzzzz keep writing!
Marlyre PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 5:55 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;when you cry, do you waste your tears?&quot; Madonna

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your imagery is superb! read some of mine?