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October 7, 2010
By pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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a poem of love is hard to write
for love is cased in a bottle of fright
the heart is a fragile, gentle thing
and when i see your face it starts to sing
a touch on the arm, a kiss on the cheek
your blue eyes make me feel weak
my stomach flutters and my palms sweat
how nervous you make me-i dont think you get.

© Louise T., Marblehead, MA

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jhsironmen12 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 4:35 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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i bet he'd love it

 

pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 22 2010 at 2:33 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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idk it would be weirdd
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 22 2010 at 1:58 pm
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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wellwhy not?
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 22 2010 at 1:47 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

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noo.....             
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 22 2010 at 7:34 am
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

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awww thats so sweet. he must be so lucky. has he read it yet?
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 21 2010 at 1:30 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

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thanks and haha yeah i know what you mean...yeah i wrote this about a guy who is now my boyfriend(:
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 21 2010 at 7:41 am
jhsironmen12 PLATINUM, Jackson, Ohio
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Life's not about how hard you can hit; it's about how hard you can get hit and keep moving forward, how much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done.

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great poem. Absolutly love it... Is that how you spell absolutly?..... ohwell you know what I mean