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Broken

October 11, 2010
By Anonymous

The waves crash against the shore,
Dark clouds cover the warm golden sky.
A life is taken, a heart is broken.
Rain pours from the sky of her eyes like never before.
Everything that she knew is forgotten.
Silence fills a heart, there’s nothing left to feel.


The author's comments:
My first published poem. I'm new at this.

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shocking. GOLD said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 9:31 am
shocking. GOLD, West Bloomfield, Michigan
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This is amazing!! Keep writing!

on Oct. 23 2010 at 11:30 pm
BellelaVie SILVER, Fairbanks, Alaska
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This really gets you. It is amazing, short but you can read between the lines beautifully. keep writing!

on Oct. 23 2010 at 3:57 pm
LittleSissy95 GOLD, Lincoln, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
\\\\\\\"Even though with everything that has happen i still think people are good at heart\\\\\\\" -Anne Frank

I really liked this. Keep up the writing!

Jenx3 said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 12:07 pm
Jenx3, PJS, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Have faith, restart"

Thank you! It means a lot.

crfcaio SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 11:43 am
crfcaio SILVER, Santa Monica, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;When there is a will, there is a way.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;If you don&#039;t go after what you want, you&#039;ll never have it. If you don&#039;t ask, the answer is always no. If you don&#039;t step forward, you&#039;re always in the same place.&quot;

Nice start, bro, just keep going that you will get better =)

on Oct. 23 2010 at 10:38 am
soupbowl21 GOLD, Sanford, North Carolina
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You may be new, but you definitely have a way with words! It is beautiful, yet heartbreaking.

A lovely poem, with a well-achieved meaning!